Ch. 3_Pg. 69

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February 6th, 2007, 12:14 pm

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Author's Comments:

kurasune, February 6th, 2007, 12:20 pm

All in all, I'm quite pleased with myself... I had a good drawing day when I did this, and even though I was super worried about how the last panel would turn out--Jon wiping steam off the mirror--I'm pleased to say that it turned out better than expected.

Ahh...cutting down my upload days from 3 to 2 days a week has been a real load off my mind. ^__^ I hope it will translate into better drawn pages! I'm also happy with how the sequence has worked out so far (from Atsushi and Daisuke's confrontation at school over the package till now). I'm not going to post up any more old pages (the sketchbook ones), so hopefully the storyline will flow better.

Please do check out the homepage for NEWS and an image I put up of the original pencil sketch for this page. I'm gonna be doing that for the next little while, because I think it might be interesting for you all to see the stages of progression that it takes from start to finish.

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User's Comments:

asharknamedmooduh, February 6th, 2007, 12:23 pm

yay! pretty page! i really like the last panel...it came out really well!

H0lyhandgrenade, February 6th, 2007, 12:45 pm

Wow. That drawing of him wiping the steam of the mirror is real pretty.

xhahakristinax, February 6th, 2007, 4:46 pm

I swear.
You have the best fanserviced in this comic. =D

Shano12, February 6th, 2007, 6:17 pm

BUTT! xDDDDDD

kurasune, February 6th, 2007, 7:49 pm

Sami, I was thinking of what you said (in regards to the previous comic page) when I did this page; how you wanted to see his face after the fact. The quiet intensity of the page was all in effort to live up to your expectations! LOL! ^_~

MuriraRK, February 6th, 2007, 8:32 pm

I SEE HIS BOOTY! HAR HAR HAR! XD

Nifty page [like always ^_~]! Heheehee, and you can never go wrong with that funky crosshatchy thing. I love that tone! RAWR!

XD You're getting good at making things intense. Heehee.

Heldrad, February 6th, 2007, 9:38 pm

woowww!!! *---* The last panel!! looks so cool! so real! x33 And my, I love his body! he's so sexy!
superb job! love the update! x3

gothickitty, February 7th, 2007, 1:02 am

oh my gods where did u get ur talent from?

Kuromei, February 7th, 2007, 5:22 am

Awww. Poor Jon. D:>
I feel really sorry for him, but I still can't take my eyes off his tush. O_o
You're art is always amazing. ^w^

Odonto (Guest), February 7th, 2007, 6:52 am

Yay! Nipples and ass in a page AT THE SAME TIME!!! And gosh, it's smuty but still lyrical! You have a blessing to do this kind of thing >.<
*nosebleeds*

Your comic is the best ever!

kurasune, February 7th, 2007, 11:32 am

Murira--today the crosshatching tone...tomorrow, the world!!

Heldrad and Sami--I always look forward to your comments...please also check the NEWS section where I've responded to your posts there.

Gothickitty--hard work and perseverance. No seriously, you guys really help me be motivated to keep trying harder and to keep thinking of interesting ways to portray things.

Kuromei, Odonto--thank you so much for your comments! I'm so happy you think my art is good. ^_____^

Neka--yeah, I do like naked boys. Heck, I just like the human form, male or female. Jon works out you see...Atsushi naked would be less muscled and more boyish.

Pic_chick--you spelled incredible correctly, and thank you!

InfiniteReveries, February 7th, 2007, 11:39 am

WOW... How hot is this page...*faints*...

I love the last panel! You captured the eyes beautifully...when I look at his eyes I see regret and dispair at the same time...for some reason I also see determination...

Great job as always Kurasune-sensei!

Korin (Guest), February 7th, 2007, 6:30 pm

Very well drawn. Everything comes together on this panel nicely.The square with Jon's face is really beautiful. His hear looks all detailed and his eyes say a lot.

<_< Jon's nipples still bother me, though...and no, I'm not just saying stuff. I draw too and...well, I'll show you what I mean if you want.

kurasune, February 7th, 2007, 6:36 pm

Korin--yes, I remember you saying something about Jon's nipples in the Christmas pic. What exactly bothers you about them? You can email me about it if you want...find my contact on my author page. Thanks!

*edit* Actually I'm quite curious to know what you have to say. ^_^

kitkattcassy (Guest), February 9th, 2007, 9:11 am

...is it wrong that i enjoy seeing boys cry? i dunno...i just think it's so unbelievably cute! hmmm....i wonder what's going to happen next......an damn, i'm not sure which one i want him to end up with! *growls in frustration*

Fizzy-chan, February 9th, 2007, 4:55 pm

You draw so well! You did a good job.

N15H, August 12th, 2007, 12:11 am

Jon is so pretty and angsty! if i were David, i'd say "screw daisuke!" and book a one way ticket back to canada! ^_^

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