Ch. 3_Pg. 78

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March 16th, 2007, 1:22 pm

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Author's Comments:

kurasune, March 16th, 2007, 10:53 am

Oh No! Jon fans look away quick! I'm so terrible aren't I. >___< I have to tell you all right now, Atsushi x Daisuke is my favourite coupling. That doesn't mean that my preference will in any way affect what I have going on in the plot or the eventual ending though, so don't worry about it. It's just that after years of these guys being in my head with me, they're like friends or family. ^__^

I hope all of you are enjoying the story so far! Chapter three is coming to a close soon...finally...tanoshimini!

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User's Comments:

Golemking, March 16th, 2007, 1:47 pm

whooooo i love this comic.

XxIntegralEinxX, March 16th, 2007, 1:47 pm

Waiiiiiiii!!! Kiss!! X3 WAIIII *squeek*

Dokidoki!! xD

P.S. Are sound effects supposed to be in Hiragana or Katakana? ^^;; Sorry, just curious...Im trying to start using them.

InfiniteReveries, March 16th, 2007, 1:55 pm

KISSSSS!!! Damn it! Come on kiss already!!

LOVE the middle panel of Atsushi's eyes!

I also love the fact that you didn't do any background toning to the bottom left three panels. I like the fact that its kept clean and simple so the reader just "sees" the motions and can focus on the intense sceen that's playing out.

I can just hear a heart beating beating loudly in the background while looking at those three panels...hand on shoulder...hand on chin...a caressing whisper "Atushi"...*sighs then faints...*

LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!

kurasune, March 16th, 2007, 2:00 pm

Ed-chan--Oh dear! Are us manga-kas so predictable? LOL!

Golemking--Thank you! I love you for loving it! ^__^

XxIntegralEinxX--Regarding japanese sound effects, I've seen them both in hiragana and katakana in the same comic. I use them interchangeably too...mostly depending on how I want the pages to look. For example, if I want very bold looking sounds, I go for katakana. Other times, if I want a softer feeling, or I simply like the look of the characters more, I'll use hiragana (which I think looks prettier, IMO).

InfiniteReveries--You're always so manic, you know that? LOL! Just teasing sweetie! I kept the transition panels clean of tones for just that reason, so the motion comes across better.

Anasha, March 16th, 2007, 2:10 pm

*stares while holding a giant mallet* Daisuke *grr*

Misoka_Bane, March 16th, 2007, 3:02 pm

ooooo.....it's all so exciting...can't wait for more ^.^

Corbeau, March 16th, 2007, 3:46 pm

Argh, leave Atsushi alone! (Jon fan)
Okay... Kiss him, and THEN leave him alone ^^ (Shonen-ai! :D)

asharknamedmooduh, March 16th, 2007, 3:52 pm

ooooo.....i sense an interruption....or a very heated kiss...

porcelain_rain, March 16th, 2007, 4:30 pm

ok looks like a kiss or there all gonna barge through the door...love the comic all together xD

kurasune, March 16th, 2007, 5:29 pm

Pic_chick--Aww! Thank you! Seems like everyone wants to kiss poor little Atsushi! He's like a little lost puppy. LOL!

Neka--I'm afraid Daisuke may be a little hard of hearing...or maybe it's just 'cus he's the type who always does just what he wants.

Anasha--LOL! Don't worry, Jon will have his chance one day. ^_~

Sami--^__^ I'm afraid for Atsushi's mind after this too...he's in for a rough time, that's for sure.

Misoka_Bane--More comes on Tuesday as usual!

Corbeau--Shonen-ai always wins out in the end! Yay! Two cute boys kissing is always great...we should have more of that. ^_~

Asharknamedmooduh--which would you prefer?

porcelain_rain--Thank you for your love! And yes, those Daisuke fangirls can be quite forceful...who knows what might happen next.

Reiji, March 16th, 2007, 5:51 pm

Oh my... this is my favorite pairing too, and you should TOTALLY let it effect the out-come of this manga! <3

KISS SCENE!

If you're mean and make an interuption, I'm going to cry! Haha!

xhahakristinax, March 16th, 2007, 7:00 pm

Woah, wonderful plot. <3 XD

MuriraRK, March 16th, 2007, 7:29 pm

Hahaha, their faces are reaaaally close together in the last panel. Looks like they're already kissing. Bwaha! XD ::runs in circles::

kurasune, March 16th, 2007, 7:41 pm

A-san--arigato! You rox too! I'm writing the scripts to the last pages of Ch.3 as we speak!

Reiji--Aww, sweetie, don't cry! There'll be more than enough kisses to go around in this manga, don't worry.

xhahakristinax--Thanks!

Murira--Na, they're not kissing...it's just another one of Daisuke's intimidation/flirtation techniques. LOL!

Waah! So many comments today! (I'm so pleased! ^_____^) It's spring break or something?

Korin (Guest), March 16th, 2007, 10:00 pm

X_x okay...yeah, you just HAD to kill an hope I had in Dai-san being the least bit nice in that last post, didn't you??? I really thought it was slightly sweet...at first.

And er, yeah, sorry for disappearing for a while. I've been busy, and yes I'm still trying to figure out how to explain guys' nipples to you (-__- man, what a weird topic)...although, after doing some research...I think you are not as inaccurate as I originally thought you were...I think it varies from guy to guy and while his nipples in that one picture of tied-up John was somewhat weird, I don't think you are necessarily doing the whole thing wrong. Gomen.

...how can I keep a straight face while talking like pervy kuso????!!!!...-___-...

kurasune, March 17th, 2007, 3:09 am

Hey Korin, no worries! Busy-ness affects all of us.

Guys' nipples...yeah, they do vary a lot...but trust me, I've seen enough of them in real life, up close, to know where they are supposed to be placed. They're different from women's because they're off to the side more.

It's not a pervy topic. Everyone has nipples; it's natural! ^__^

Hope you're enjoying the comic so far.

ninjarobot, March 17th, 2007, 9:58 am

oooooo the first panel is so purdy.

<3

thanks for the welcome back karasune :D i missed you, sunshine <333

Korin (Guest), March 17th, 2007, 1:33 pm

Indeed...that was actually my complaint, they were not low and to the sides enough...but since apparently you have more model than I do...then...I will then leave the drawing of nipples to you! XD o_o;...I mean, I've swam in gym, but I never observed the guys too much...

*kicks* but whhyyy?...why must you, Dai-san?? *kicks Daisuke* Nihonyarou >-<.

(also, I always thought Daisuke had brown hair)

*edit*

Waii...what about pairing, DaiJon??? Atsushi can be free to find a nice girl! *gets shot*

kurasune, March 17th, 2007, 6:38 pm

Ninjarobot--thank you! I worked hard on that panel...the perspective is a bit tricky. ^_~ I missed you too!!

naruko_90--Heehee! I'm sorry, perhaps it'll be Jon next time?

Korin--Yes darlin'...I have access to enough males to model aplenty. ^__^ Just a note, when a guy is really buff and his pecs have a lot of definition, the nipples sit a lot lower. Jon is buff, but he's not total body-builder buff, hence the reason why you may have not felt they were in the right place.

Yes, Daisuke has brown hair...it's hard to do brown when all you have are shades of grey though...^_~

Hmm...yes, Daisuke x Jon would be interesting, wouldn't it! LOL!

Korin (Guest), March 17th, 2007, 8:40 pm

Oh...haha..yes, that one picture you had with him with grey hair is actually a fanart ^^u <=stupids...I thought it was your art because it was your lineart.

*edit*

Well, back to about the drawing thing...I don't have much to say then, but here's my photobucket account:

http://s6.photobucket.com/albums/y248/Tokubi/?start=0

What I would have done was picked a good picture that I drew and show you but...anyway, take a look at my art. You ought to be able to find a shirtless guy somewhere there...

About 80% of the stuff is mine so you should be able to identify it pretty quickly. The ink and color pencil or just normal pencil is mine...the sketchier ones with really big eyes are my sister's (but there's only a few of hers). Yah, so tell me what you think

*edit again*

Y'know...I've never stared at shirtless guys much before, even though there are always lots of them when I go swimming...I learned how to draw shirtless guys by reading Rurouni Kenshin XP...

Haien_Luv, March 18th, 2007, 12:22 pm

EEK!Hes too close to Daisuke!

rakka981, March 18th, 2007, 12:36 pm

i want a kiss man they are cute together even though that guy is a jerk i would have punched him too

kurasune, March 19th, 2007, 1:23 am

Korin--I checked out your photobucket. If you'd like, please email me through my contact on my Author Page and we can talk more about drawing, etc, okay? It's easier to email than carry on a conversation through this comment section. Thanks!

Haien_Luv--Haaaha! More like Daisuke's too close to Atsushi. ^_~

rakka981--I'm sure lots of people would like to take a swing at Daisuke if they could.

MilkCat--Sorry! Updates are every Tuesday and Friday. Is this your first post? Welcome to Ai, Kanarazu!

Thanks for the comments everyone!

Odonto (Guest), March 20th, 2007, 7:12 am

Oh boy! I bet he won't be kissing him now.
Tease him to death, Daisuke! *wa-hahaha*evil laughter* Let him crave for more!

Guest, November 9th, 2007, 7:07 pm

DON;T YOU DARE KISS HIM, YOU SPOILED BRAT OU!!! *waves sharp fork around* AVAST, YE SCUM OF ZE EARTH!!! o.O

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