YESSSSSSS! It is UP! A comic page and new layout! Yatta!
I made the deadline! *pant pant*
Atsushi and Jon are having another telephone conversation...it seems strange to see boys on the phone so much, but Atsushi is very talkative. ^__^
I hope everyone likes the new colours in the layout. I spent a lot of time colouring the trio up on the top banner...not satisfied at all with it, but whatever. Spring has officially sprung on Ai, Kanarazu!
Kuromei--is the last panel really that good? Wow. Thanks! ^__^
A-san--Yes, finally indeed! I'm happy the layout is up. Glad you like the colours.
Aura--Your guys' comments make me go SQUEE! ^___^
Odonto--I do agree that Jon is bad for stringing Amanda on...more like he's using her like an experiment to see if he can love girls. Daisuke is bad because he's never been told that he can't get his own way all the time. Atsushi...well, he's just permanently confused, IMO. Haha!
xhahakristinax--Oops! You posted when I was posting, so I missed your post! Yes, there is love...but neither of them know it yet.
Thank you all SO much for leaving all the lovely comments. (Such a nice thing to wake up too.) I'm looking at my new layout from my work computer, and I must concede that I'm fairly proud of it. It's such a refreshing, colourful change from Winter's sombre layout. (Now to plan summer's layout...hmm.)
I love the idea of the last panel, the phone making them all close like that. The only problem for me is the position of the dialogue, shouldn't "yeah, i mean i just punched.." be all as one paragraph so its visually before/above the reply "wow you punched the jerk"?
Thanks so very much for bringing us this story!
Daemoness--The 'yeah!' from Atsushi was in response to Jon's 'yeah?'. I know it may have made it slightly more understandable if the 'I mean I just punched..." was further up, but given the context I thought there would be no difficulty in figuring out who was saying what.
Visually, I prefer it in separate sections to give a feeling of Atsushi pausing and being slightly uncertain as he admits what he did to Jon, and also because the panel appears more balanced overall if the words are not so clumped together.
Thanks very much for your imput and for enjoying my little story! ^_^