Need more tones!
I spent almost an hour trying to decide on the last panel tone, and ended up just doing a gradated sand tone. I was hoping for speed lines or something, but...none of them looked right, and I only have like 4 or 5 to choose from. Blah.
I hope the tone created enough impact though...kinda like the world stops for a second.
This page is actually the amalgamation of two pages from my older layout. The next few pages will be like this...redrawn and replotted from old stuff. ^__^
I think that last panel's tone is fine. Maybe a sorta zoom-line thing going out from the center could've worked, or some sort of complete spot black. Hahaha, well, whatever. The sand works well. ^_^ Do you use Photoshop for all your toning? [pssst...is it all right if I put a link to you on my links page?]